College Essay Example: Ms. Chen



Sunday morning, before the sun and birds and breakfast smells, I’m awake, lying in bed in the middle of all that soft gray stillness and listening to the rain come down, making tinny sounds on the gutters, a mellower putputput against the roof. I haven’t gotten up yet to turn the radio alarm off, but the volume is turned low so that the song floats behind the watery pattering of the rain like a whisper, a memory. Moon River, wider than a mile: I’m crossing you in style some day… [Johnny Mercer, 1961]


            I know the song, and hearing it brings it all back. After my piano teacher’s memorial service, as I was cleaning out my piano bench, I’d found the tape he’d given his students for Christmas, recordings of him playing a selection of his favorites. It’d opened with Tchaikovsky’s First. It’d ended with Moon River. 

Two drifters, off to see the world. There’s such a lot of world to see…I am reminded of a story about a little boy who loved music so much he practiced in the dead of night on a piano with chipped keys and missing hammers because his parents couldn’t afford anything more; who met Arthur Rubinstein and walked away thinking, I’m going to have that one day, and I’m going to tour Europe and play a Steinway and wear a bowtie and make recordings for the world to hear; who grew up but kept playing and played his way into Juilliard, and played his way to Europe; and there was music, and fear and darkness in Cold War-era Germany, and love, and then children.

But there’s another story, about a man who divorces and settles in Monterey for retirement and becomes a teacher, a mentor, records tapes only his students hear, lives several quiet more years, and one day locks himself in his car and falls asleep breathing in the carbon monoxide trickling out of the end of a rubber hose, dreaming of music and sunsets.  We’re after the same rainbow’s end, waitin’ round the bend, my 

Huckleberry friend, Moon River, and me…

            Early Sunday morning, with the rain and the radio murmuring softly in the background and myself in the gray light, and life has never seemed more beautiful or so broken.

I was doing homework with my two best friends when I found out; we were more interested in Tom Cruise and how to do French braids than trains that left Topeka at 4:00 and airplanes that lifted off at 45°. The phone rang. I penciled in an answer and my mother picked the phone, and I looked up from my homework and watched her face change.

After the memorial service, I ran a search and Yahoo! pulled up a newspaper article. I read it several times, wordlessly. My piano teacher had not died because of a car accident or a heart attack.    Pianist commits suicide…

Right then, my composure broke and I suddenly had the sense that I was simultaneously falling and being crushed. He was—had been—the best pianist on the face of the earth. He’d had a beard, a stomach going round with age. Like Mr. Rogers, he took off his shoes and hung up his jacket when he came in. He had been there for my first recital, and he’d clapped and whooped louder than anyone. He was invincible, in his brilliance and warmth immune to sickness.
He’d considered me his best student, and I didn’t know why. The moment I had to play for anyone, including him, my arms would jellify, my fingers would ossify, and my palms would sweat-ify. I’d be embarrassed to look at him after butchering a piece, afraid that I’d find his face twisted in disgust or plastered with a forced encouraging smile. Instead, I’d see understanding: There’s no reason to be ashamed, because I know.

And so I remembered and remembered, and they were golden memories, but all I could feel was sadness hollowing out my bones. Then, gradually, anger and hurt. My computer began to hibernate. I tried to think, but all I could come up with was How could he? He was kinder and brighter and stronger than I was, and yet I couldn’t imagine myself facing anything that would make me give up, and maybe that’s because I have only felt the weakest of life’s blows—but I did know what it was to open yourself and be weighed and found wanting, to be laughed at and discouraged, to fail and fall until it felt like your heart would bleed. And because of this, all I knew was determination. It is what makes me send a short story out again after I receive its thirteenth rejection, it is how I keep writing and standing in the ruthless writing business. When I ask myself why—why dream so boldly, why risk so much—I know, at almost the same moment I begin to question, exactly why. Love for what I do—passion. Strength of mind—the courage to hope, and the knowledge that I will be OK because my existence is not all words and musical notes, but also the bonds that I make, sometimes through those words and notes.
He not only had his music, his passion, to live for, he had his students and his daughter and his grandsons—so how could he? Why?


Because my emotions were jumbled and my thoughts were going nowhere, I woke my computer up and wrote for a bit, did some sorting. My teacher, when he was younger, used to have the same problem I did. Nerves so bad he would retch into a plastic bag before the curtains parted and he would snap up ramrod straight. And instead of being sorry for me but unable to suppress that little burst of lightness because he himself had gotten over it and didn’t have to deal with it anymore, he had compassion for me. Sitting in front of the computer, I remembered what he had done for me and what I was not doing for him, and I took a breath, stepped back and swallowed my own feelings, my preconceptions, my sense of right and wrong. I began a story; I created a character, fashioned a world for him, and set out to understand. So that one day, when it was over for me too, I could turn to my teacher, who had once believed in and felt for me like a grandfather, and look at him with compassion—not pity or uncertainty, a face twisted in disgust or plastered with a forced encouraging smile—and say, You shouldn’t have been ashamed of your life, because I know; I know what it’s like to carry the weight of the world, we’re in the same boat.
At the end of my journey, at the bottom of page twenty, I skipped a line and wrote Pity steps to the side and says, I’m sorry. I’m glad I’m not you. Compassion says, I know. Then I deleted everything.

So it’s Sunday morning, three years later, the sun rising and making the rain look like diamonds, my dog thumping his tail against my door, and, with these thoughts in mind, I’m out of bed, pulling the curtains apart to open the window, reminded of why it feels so good to breathe, to feel, fearlessly and deeply, sorrow, and compassion, and peace.

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