Wednesday, 9/2

* Open

• Copy, label your sentence type, and give your reason:
• Jeremiah 6:16: "Thus says the LORD : 'Stand in the ways and see,/ And ask for the old paths, where the good way is,/ And walk in it;/ Then you will find rest for your souls.' "

* Trade and Comment On Other Students' Work.  Read 2-3.

• Look for the following:
• Do you hear the voice of this student?  How is it unique?  How is it predictable or generic? 
• Is there a beginning, middle, and end?  How could the narrative flow be improved?  How could the conclusion be more memorable?
• Circle grammar errors.  Suggest improvements as you can.  Circle selections/sections that should be rewritten for greater impact.  

* Work in Class (study or essay FD)

HW: FD College Essay; Study for the Test

• Printed
• Turnitin.com (next week)
• MLA Format
• Include Prompt(s) 
• You may turn in the FD of your essay as late as block day next week.